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Author: mcasperson

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     anything but predictable.</p>
 
 <p>The flip side of bringing people into a platform team is to consider the option of secondments to embed members of
-    the platform team back into the wider DevOps teams as a method of sharing knowledge and experience.
+    the platform team back into the wider DevOps ecosystem as a method of sharing knowledge and experience.
 
     David Jorm, Head Of Security At x15ventures, noted in the podcast "The Journey To Build your Platform Engineering
     Team" (<a href="https://oc.to/a07RuP">https://oc.to/a07RuP</a> that:
 </p>
 
 <p class="quote">One of the ways to solve [architectural and cultural issues] is to get secondments from the core
-    platform team into that individual engineering team so that I can bring access some of the thinking behind what was
-    done there.</p>
+    platform team into that individual engineering team so that I can access some of the thinking behind what was
+    done [by the platform team].</p>
 
 <p>The activities listed in this chapter support teams in the initial stages of their platform engineering journey. The
     aim is not to make the platform team experts in product management, marketing, technical writing, and training.