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Author: mcasperson

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@@ -92,7 +92,8 @@ <h2>What is Platform Engineering?</h2>
     work often performed by DevOps teams. This avoids the unfalsifiability of DevOps. The difference between DEaaS and
     other tasks is whether the work can be used as the foundation for a new project or team.</p>
 
-<p>Consider that every major Operating System (OS) these days has the ability to host Virtual Machines (VMs). Does that mean you have
+<p>Consider that every major Operating System (OS) these days has the ability to host Virtual Machines (VMs). Does that
+    mean you have
     implemented IaaS by giving every engineer a device with a modern OS? Of course not. IaaS requires the ability to
     provision a durable, accessible, supported, and monitored VM on demand, or at least with as little friction as
     possible.</p>
@@ -125,7 +126,10 @@ <h2>What is Platform Engineering?</h2>
 <h2>Conclusion</h2>
 
 <p>DevOps is arguably the best philosophy we have to build high performing teams to deliver technical solutions. But
-    just because DevOps can be used as teh foundation for great teams, there is no guarantee that it will.</p>
+    while DevOps can be used as the foundation for great teams, the demands placed on teams must be matched
+    by their capability. Asking DevOps teams to provide their own unique implementation to every requirement leads to
+    inconsistent solutions at best and eventually creates an unsustainable environment. This in turn leads to
+    frustration and poor DevEx.</p>
 
 <p>Platform engineering is an acknowledgment that common problems are best solved with common solutions, and that
     solving common problems is one of the most effective methods for improving DevEx.</p>