Devarshi comments

Author: jhlodin

src/current/_includes/v26.1/sidebar-data/cloud-deployments.json

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
         ]
     },
     {
-        "title": "Prepare a BYOC Deployment",
+        "title": "BYOC Deployments (Preview)",
         "urls": [
             "/cockroachcloud/byoc-deployment.html"
         ]

src/current/cockroachcloud/byoc-deployment.md

@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ toc: true
 keywords: deployment, byoc
 ---
 
-CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} supports a "bring your own cloud" (BYOC) deployment model, where a CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} {{ site.data.products.advanced }} deployment is hosted in your own account. This model allows you to take more control of security and take advantage of existing cloud service credits or discounts.
+CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} supports a "bring your own cloud" (BYOC) deployment model, where CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} {{ site.data.products.advanced }} is hosted in your own account rather than in an account managed by Cockroach Labs. This model allows you to take more control of security and take advantage of existing cloud service credits or discounts.
 
 {{site.data.alerts.callout_info}}
 The BYOC {{ site.data.products.cloud }} deployment option is currently in [Preview]({% link {{ site.current_cloud_version }}/cockroachdb-feature-availability.md %}). BYOC deployments are only supported in Microsoft Azure.
 {{site.data.alerts.end}}
 
-This page describes how to prepare a cloud service account to host a BYOC CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} {{ site.data.products.advanced }} deployment in Microsoft Azure.
+This page describes how to prepare a cloud service account to host a BYOC deployment of CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.cloud }} {{ site.data.products.advanced }} in Microsoft Azure.
 
 ## Shared responsibility model for BYOC