Update home + ufo50

Author: muhsinking

content/index.md

@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ title: Welcome home
 
 I'm Mo, a writer, artist, and lover of humans/computers/cats/[[Words|words]] living in Brooklyn, NY. This is where I collect my favorite bits of [[essays/|writing]], as well as various [[notes/|notes]], [[lists/|lists]], and [[tags/frameworks|frameworks]] that I find worth revisiting.
 
-Topics range from [[tags/philosophy|philosophy]], [[tags/anthropology|anthropology]], to reviews of [[tags/books|books]] and [[tags/games|games]], to ideas for how to [[tags/living|live well]]. Some pieces are (relatively) polished, while others are stubs or works in progress.
+Topics range from [[tags/philosophy|philosophy]], [[tags/anthropology|anthropology]], to reviews of [[lists/books|books]] and [[tags/games|games]], to ideas for how to [[tags/living|live well]]. Some pieces are (relatively) polished, while others are stubs or works in progress.
 
 If something here resonates with you, feel free to reach out to me at potluckpresscorps@gmail.com. I’d love to hear your thoughts.
 
 If you're not sure where to start, here are a few of my favorite essays:
 
 - [[Everything happens for a reason]]: Thoughts on rejection, cope, and storytelling.
 - [[But really, I do love you]]: What we mean when we say the words "I love you" across cultures and time.
-- [[The end]]: Common thought patterns around about aging and dying—and how to break them.
+- [[Why we work]]: Towards an ontology of labor orientations.
 
 Or, if you're curious: [[Taking notes out loud|why I made this site]].

content/notes/UFO 50.md

@@ -13,29 +13,30 @@ I can't believe this game exists.
 	- This game must be like 10 hours long wth.
 - **Mooncat**
 	- Incredible idea; wonderful execution.
-	- [Music](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mPpBECMrBpc&list=PLgFVH9V-HKYmL3PCUGzhc1SCUCXll9SzM&index=28) is some of the best in the whole collection IMO.
+	- Some of my favorite [music](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mPpBECMrBpc&list=PLgFVH9V-HKYmL3PCUGzhc1SCUCXll9SzM&index=28) in the whole collection.
 - **Party House**
 	- Essentially a push-your luck type board game.
 	- Absolutely adorable sprites & sounds.
 - **Avianos**
 	- 4X game about The Bird Wars, where you take actions by praising various dinosaur deities.
-	- Reminded me of Master of Magic (1994), my favorite 4X of all time.
-	- Perfect. No notes. OK one note: I wanted more of it.
+	- Reminds me of Master of Magic (1994), perhaps my favorite 4X of all time.
+	- Perfect. No notes.
+	- OK one note: I want more.
 - **Devilition**: 
 	- AKA Into the Breach 2.
 	- Boiled my brain.
 	- Kind of hate the way it looks.
 - **Paint Chase:**
 	- Pac-man meets Splatoon.
 - **Waldorf's Journey:**
-	- What if jumping was hard and bad, but that was... fun?
+	- What if jumping was hard and bad, but that was fun.
 	- Bennet Foddy-esque.
 - **Vainger**:
-	- Metroidvania is such an unbelievably GOATed genre.
-	- Final boss sucks, though :thumbsdown:
+	- Metroidvania is such a GOATed genre.
+	- But the final boss sucks IMO.
 
 ## Lowlights
 
-- Quitting out of **Mooncat** 30 minutes in, then realizing the game has no save function...
-- **Porgy**: I adore the look, but not sure where to find the fun.
-- **Golfaria**: I'm just bad at it, okay?
+- Quitting out of **Mooncat** 30 minutes in, and then realizing the game has no save function.
+- **Porgy**: Adore the look, but not sure where to find the fun.
+- **Golfaria**: I'm just bad at it, okay.