feat: made changes

Made changes to text requested by Jerome

Author: Kemi-Elizabeth

sites/platform/src/development/regions.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ You can choose a region based on criteria such as its closeness to your users an
 
 ## Environmental impact
 
-At {{% vendor/name %}}, we are committed to reducing our environmental impact. Whenever you create a project with us, we provide information about the electricity grid provider for that region. You can view the average carbon intensity of the energy grid in grams of CO2 equivalent per kilowatt-hour.
+Whenever you create a project with us, we provide information about the electricity grid provider for that region. You can view the average carbon intensity of the energy grid in grams of CO2 equivalent per kilowatt-hour.
 These data are sourced from an annual average, which we update as new information becomes available. If you want to see real-time emissions generated by each power grid, we recommend checking out [Electricity Maps](https://app.electricitymap.org/map). You can also access a public GitHub page of Electricity Maps [data sources](https://github.com/electricitymap/electricitymap-contrib/blob/master/DATA_SOURCES.md).
 
 Summary of data being used in {{% vendor/name %}}’s Region Picker when creating a new Project:
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ See all available information in the [API documentation](https://api.platform.sh
 
 The Carbon Emissions dashboard provides an overview of the carbon footprint associated with your cloud resource usage. This dashboard calculates emissions using a Carbon Price List (CPL) methodology, inspired by the Cloud Carbon Footprint model. 
 
-Users can view total emissions over time and track project specific emissions for the current year, broken down by kilograms of CO2 equivalent (kg CO2e). The dashboard also includes information about how emissions are calculated and what factors (server location, usage etc.) can influence those totals.
+Users can view total emissions over time and project specific emissions for the current year, broken down by kilograms of CO2 equivalent (kg CO2e). The dashboard also includes information about how emissions are calculated and what factors (server location, usage etc.) can influence those totals.
 
 #### Access the dashboard
 

sites/upsun/src/development/regions.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ You can choose a region based on criteria such as its closeness to your users an
 
 ## Environmental impact
 
-At {{% vendor/name %}}, we are committed to reducing our environmental impact. Whenever you create a project with us, we provide information about the electricity grid provider for that region. You can view the average carbon intensity of the energy grid in grams of CO2 equivalent per kilowatt-hour.
+Whenever you create a project with us, we provide information about the electricity grid provider for that region. You can view the average carbon intensity of the energy grid in grams of CO2 equivalent per kilowatt-hour.
 These data are sourced from an annual average, which we update as new information becomes available. If you want to see real-time emissions generated by each power grid, we recommend checking out [Electricity Maps](https://app.electricitymap.org/map). You can also access a public GitHub page of Electricity Maps [data sources](https://github.com/electricitymap/electricitymap-contrib/blob/master/DATA_SOURCES.md).
 
 Summary of data being used in {{% vendor/name %}}’s Region Picker when creating a new Project: