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Automated review and documentation improvements for notebooks/content_extraction.ipynb on branch main

LLM usage details:

  • Total tokens: 19696
  • Prompt tokens: 9959
  • Completion tokens: 9737
  • Used deployment: cu-samples-gpt-4.1-mini
  • API version: 2024-12-01-preview

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Automated LLM code review (section-based).

LLM usage details:

  • Total tokens used: 10476.
  • Used deployment: cu-samples-gpt-4.1-mini
  • API version: 2024-12-01-preview

"## Prerequisites\n",
"1. Ensure your Azure AI service is configured by following the [configuration steps](../README.md#configure-azure-ai-service-resource).\n",
"1. Please ensure your Azure AI service is configured by following the [configuration steps](../README.md#configure-azure-ai-service-resource).\n",
"2. Install the required packages to run this sample."
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  • categories: [Clarity, Grammar]
    • change: Added the word "Please" at the beginning of the instruction.
    • rationale: Including "Please" makes the instruction more polite and reader-friendly, improving the tone of the documentation.
    • impact: Enhances the readability and approachability of the instruction, encouraging users to follow the configuration steps.

"Look for the `# IMPORTANT` comments in the code and modify those sections accordingly.\n",
"Skipping this step may cause the sample to not run correctly.\n",
"Skipping this step may cause the sample not to run correctly.\n",
"\n",
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  • categories: [Clarity, Grammar]

    • change: Changed "> Fill in the constants ..." to "> Please fill in the constants ..."
    • rationale: Added "Please" to make the instruction more polite and clear.
    • impact: Improves the tone and clarity of the instruction for better user engagement.
  • categories: [Clarity, Grammar]

    • change: Changed "You must update the code below ..." to "Please update the code below ..."
    • rationale: Using "Please" softens the command and improves the approachability of the instruction.
    • impact: Enhances user experience by making instructions less abrupt and more inviting.
  • categories: [Grammar]

    • change: Modified "Skipping this step may cause the sample to not run correctly." to "Skipping this step may cause the sample not to run correctly."
    • rationale: Corrected the placement of "not" for proper grammatical structure.
    • impact: Improves readability and grammatical accuracy of the documentation.

"AZURE_AI_ENDPOINT = os.getenv(\"AZURE_AI_ENDPOINT\")\n",
"# IMPORTANT: Replace with your actual subscription key or set it in your \".env\" file if not using token authentication\n",
"# IMPORTANT: Please replace with your actual subscription key or set it in your \".env\" file if not using token authentication\n",
"AZURE_AI_API_KEY = os.getenv(\"AZURE_AI_API_KEY\")\n",
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  • categories: [Grammar, Clarity]
    • change: Added the word "Please" to the beginning of the comment line.
    • rationale: This softens the instruction, making it more polite and reader-friendly.
    • impact: Improves the tone of the comment, enhancing readability and user engagement without altering the technical content.

"2. Set `GPT_4_1_DEPLOYMENT`, `GPT_4_1_MINI_DEPLOYMENT`, and `TEXT_EMBEDDING_3_LARGE_DEPLOYMENT` in your `.env` file with the deployment names"
"1. Deploy **GPT-4.1**, **GPT-4.1-mini**, and **text-embedding-3-large** models in Azure AI Foundry (see README.md for instructions).\n",
"2. Set `GPT_4_1_DEPLOYMENT`, `GPT_4_1_MINI_DEPLOYMENT`, and `TEXT_EMBEDDING_3_LARGE_DEPLOYMENT` in your `.env` file with the deployment names."
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  • categories: [Grammar, Clarity]

    • change: Modified the phrase "This step is only required" to "This step is required only"
    • rationale: Adjusted word order for more natural and clearer English phrasing.
    • impact: Improves reader comprehension by making the note sound more direct and fluent.
  • categories: [Grammar, Consistency]

    • change: Added a period at the end of the sentence "Your administrator has already configured the model deployments for you"
    • rationale: Ensures consistent punctuation and sentence completeness.
    • impact: Enhances professional tone and maintains uniformity across list items.
  • categories: [Clarity, Tone]

    • change: Changed "Before using prebuilt analyzers, you need to configure" to "Before using prebuilt analyzers, please configure"
    • rationale: Softer, more polite tone that encourages action without sounding overly directive.
    • impact: Creates a more user-friendly and engaging documentation style.
  • categories: [Grammar, Consistency]

    • change: Added periods at the end of each list item under "Model Requirements:"
    • rationale: Consistent punctuation for list items that are complete sentences or sentence fragments.
    • impact: Enhances readability and maintains formatting consistency throughout the document.
  • categories: [Grammar, Consistency]

    • change: Added periods at the end of the prerequisite list items.
    • rationale: Aligns with proper sentence punctuation and maintains consistency with other list items.
    • impact: Promotes uniform formatting and professionalism in the documentation.

" print(\" TEXT_EMBEDDING_3_LARGE_DEPLOYMENT=<your-text-embedding-3-large-deployment-name>\")\n",
" print(\" 3. Restart the kernel and run this cell again\")\n",
" print(\" 3. Restart the kernel and run this cell again.\")\n",
"else:\n",
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  • categories: [Grammar]
    • change: Added a period at the end of the sentence in the print statement ("Restart the kernel and run this cell again" → "Restart the kernel and run this cell again.")
    • rationale: Sentences are generally expected to end with proper punctuation for grammatical completeness.
    • impact: Improves the professionalism and readability of the printed message, ensuring consistent style in the output.

"saved_json_path = save_json_to_file(analysis_result, filename_prefix=\"content_analyzers_video\")\n",
"print(f\"\\n📋 Full analysis result saved. Review the complete JSON at: {saved_json_path}\")\n",
"print(f\"\\n📋 Full analysis result saved. Please review the complete JSON at: {saved_json_path}\")\n",
"\n",
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  • categories: [Grammar, Clarity]
    • change: Modified the print statement from "Review the complete JSON at:" to "Please review the complete JSON at:"
    • rationale: Adding "Please" makes the sentence more polite and user-friendly, improving the tone of the message.
    • impact: Enhances readability and user engagement by presenting the message in a courteous manner.

" Returns:\n",
" List of keyframe IDs (e.g., 'keyframes/1000', 'keyframes/2000')\n",
" List of keyframe IDs (e.g., 'keyframes/1000', 'keyframes/2000').\n",
" \"\"\"\n",
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  • categories: [Grammar, Consistency]
    • change: Added periods at the end of the parameter description ("analysis_result") and the return value description ("List of keyframe IDs ...").
    • rationale: Ensures grammatical completeness by properly ending sentences with a period, maintaining consistency in documentation style.
    • impact: Enhances readability and professionalism of the docstring, providing a clearer and more standardized documentation format.

"- **Document extraction** with the `prebuilt-documentSearch` analyzer.\n",
"- **Audio transcription** with speaker diarization using `prebuilt-audioSearch`.\n",
"- **Video analysis** with keyframe extraction using `prebuilt-videoSearch`.\n",
"\n",
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  • categories: [Clarity]

    • change: Added the phrase "In this notebook," to the introductory sentence.
    • rationale: To clarify the context in which the exploration took place, specifying that the content refers to the current notebook.
    • impact: Enhances reader understanding by explicitly linking the summary to the notebook content.
  • categories: [Grammar, Consistency]

    • change: Added periods at the end of each bulleted item describing the features explored.
    • rationale: To maintain grammatical correctness and ensure punctuation consistency across all list items.
    • impact: Improves the professional appearance and readability of the documentation.

"\n",
"Explore other notebooks in this repository to learn about custom analyzers, field extraction, and advanced scenarios!"
"Feel free to explore other notebooks in this repository to learn about custom analyzers, field extraction, and advanced scenarios!"
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  • categories: [Grammar, Clarity]

    • change: Changed the introductory sentence from "To dive deeper into Azure Content Understanding capabilities:" to "To dive deeper into Azure Content Understanding capabilities, please explore:"
    • rationale: Adding "please explore" makes the sentence more polite and invites the reader to take action, improving tone and clarity.
    • impact: Enhances reader engagement and provides a clearer call to action.
  • categories: [Consistency, Grammar]

    • change: Added periods at the end of list item descriptions.
    • rationale: Maintaining consistent punctuation across bullet points improves readability and follows standard writing conventions.
    • impact: Makes the documentation appear more professional and easier to follow.
  • categories: [Clarity]

    • change: Revised "Explore other notebooks in this repository to learn about custom analyzers, field extraction, and advanced scenarios!" to "Feel free to explore other notebooks in this repository to learn about custom analyzers, field extraction, and advanced scenarios!"
    • rationale: Adding "Feel free to" softens the tone and encourages exploration without sounding like a command.
    • impact: Improves tone, making the documentation more approachable and reader-friendly.

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  • categories: [Formatting]
    • change: Adjusted the closing brace from -} to +} by removing the misplaced hyphen before the brace.
    • rationale: Corrects the syntax by ensuring the closing brace is properly formatted without an extraneous character.
    • impact: Enhances code correctness and prevents potential syntax errors.

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